Score: 2

"Why is this 8.3mb"

submission: Lazer Shorts!

date: May 2, 2009

I don't see why the filesize on this is so huge... also, the ideas were not surprising. The charm about the lazer collection is that most of the time you didn't know what was going to happen...

But while watching this I always knew what was coming... an idea to improve on the first one... The guy is sleeping and the alarm goes off with "Imma firin mah lazor! Imma firin mah lazor! Imma firin mah lazor!" so the guy who was sleeping goes to hit the snooze button.. and then the alarm clock fires his lazer at him...

Of course that idea's not going to tickle many ribs anytime soon... but it's a more developed idea, and is more likely to make people laugh than the predictable things you got going here...

Score: 10

"Biased but..."

submission: Superhero Slayers 3

date: March 1, 2009

I love it... I'm always glad to be a part of your projects Xen!

Although in this episode I don't have much to say, I still love bein the Hulk haha... Oh and in answer to "Scbunchy" No I am not Colin Farrell. We're both Irish and we both put on that accent, and that's where the similarities end.

But awesome stuff Xen as always, and a note to everyone keep glued to this series, it's about to get epic! We have a top notch cast involved and I'm honoured to say that I have worked with them all. I personally would love to see this series get it's own collection.

Tom, you listening? Give SHS its own collection dang it!

Score: 5

"It was ok..."

submission: The Lazor Collection

date: January 27, 2009

The only thing that I would say is that the lazors were a bit predictable... you knew exactly where they were gonna come from and who was going to do it... part of the charm of the lazor collections is that you don't know.

That being said, there was a couple that made me smile

Score: 7

"Nice, but..."

submission: EFN Episode 1: Lies

date: January 24, 2009

Everything was really nice, animation and all... except for one thing. The "Irish" accent... That is not an Irish accent, an accent like that doesn't exist... it is an american bastardisation that only exists because of the New York "Irish Cop" Stereotype...

I doubt you're gonna change your VA... but it's just unfortunate that the character is based upon a stereotype.

Score: 7

"um..."

submission: & So We Love Playstation

date: January 21, 2009

when was goldeneye on the playstation?

Also a lot of those games are no longer playstation titles... either way the song was cleverly mixed, but francine, that was a little lack lustre than what I'm used to from you...

Score: 7

"Good, But I have some issues."

submission: Sonic Origins Part 2

date: June 24, 2008

-Animation-
The animation is much improved from last time, no doubt about that, some nice features that made me go "hmm, I like that" but keep at it and I've no doubt that this will develop into a masterpiece.

-Sound-
This was a problem, much like in the first part, that the music would drown out the voices. All it takes is to key mark the music and do a fade to an appropriate level. The music itself wasn't an original choice but of course it's a sonic movie and most of the music was from the sonic games but I got a bit of "Nazo Unleashed" vibe off it. Now the voices, I myself am a Voice Actor and know what I'm looking for when I hear a voice, I recognize Rina-Chan's voice as Amy and must say her Amy voice has really improved. But the mic quality of her clips dwarf the others, also I got the impression that all the other voices weren't even in the same conversation, they didn't sound like they were listening to each other and therefore it just sounds like people were reading lines and therefore made it uninteresting to listen to. I recommend you either get a voice director or some better VA's. It's always unfortunate to have sub-par VA work bring down a flashes quality.

-Overall-
Great potential to be a classic sprite movie. Nice storyline. Well animated. Just those issues with sounds to be sorted and it'll be great.

Your Friendly Neighbourhood
Shard-Spider

Score: 10

"I still can't believe..."

submission: Final Fantasy Sonic X:Ep6

date: June 10, 2008

That this hasn't been frontpaged... a lot of work went into this and the people of newgrounds can see this so why the hell not?

But I was glad to be a part of this, it was great fun to grunt and scream for battle sounds :P

good work man, keep in touch.

Score: 10

"Once again"

submission: Sonic 15th 2wo

date: April 8, 2008

A pleasure as always to work with you Ric, even though it takes some ass-kicking to get you going but you always produce good work.

Kudos

Score: 8

"Excellent, but..."

submission: Valhalla Knights 2

date: February 6, 2008

The animation and graphics were superb, the storyline is interesting and i want to see where this all goes, the only let down... the voice acting, the quality isn't very good at all and the actor didn't even sound like he knew what he was saying. Also sometimes the music and sound effects overwhelmed the voices

So that's why I give it a 8

Score: 10

"Great Work!"

submission: Darfur Satire Shorts

date: February 2, 2008

I'm so glad to have been part of this... I can only hope I've helped to bring awareness in some way to the horrible atrocities in Darfur.

Oh and the transformers effects are a custom effect that I applied to the voices, so I didn't use a specific program other than audacity.

But good work Chakra-X once again another well animated piece of work from you and I look forward to working with you again sometime in the future